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"Many Happy Returns:"
Survey Research: Part Three

To close out our survey research discussion, dear cyber-partners, we'll take a look at the following topics:

  1. Elements of a "good" survey cover letter;
  2. Non-response - the specific reason why it is problematic in research and what can be done to (hopefully) increase the response rate

I. The Survey Cover Letter

While most attention is naturally focused on the "proper development" of the survey instrument itself, researchers need to also keep in mind the "power of first impressions" conveyed by the cover letter!

Many, if not most, survey researchers end up "mass-mailing" and/or "mass-distributing" their surveys (for the latter, for example, delivering the "bundle" to a school staff member who will then disseminate them to faculty mailboxes on your behalf). However, a minority of survey researchers may choose to distribute their surveys "live and in person:" e.g., to be there when the subjects fill out the surveys, & to collect them afterwards. This sometimes happens as part of a focus group interview, for you qualitative research fans! You may be asking the interview subjects to complete a short demographic, knowledge, or attitude/perception questionnaire, either before or after the interview itself. For you, I still contend that it is a 'valuable exercise' to go ahead and draft a sample cover letter anyway! It will help ensure that you cover certain key points in your introductory comments and instructions to your 'live survey/interview' subjects!

A. Elements of a "Good" Survey Cover Letter

William Wiersma (1995) has suggested the following qualities or characteristics of a "good" survey cover letter. I have added some adaptations to reflect my own experiences with survey research:

  1. The purpose of the survey is clearly identified in the opening paragraph of the cover letter. For doctoral and/or master's student researchers, you might identify yourself too, and indicate that "this research is being done as part of my master's thesis/doctoral dissertation degree requirements at Northern Arizona University."
  2. The recipient is informed as to the reason he/she has been selected to receive the survey instrument.
  3. As part of both #1 and #2, above, the recipient is clearly informed as to what will be done with the responses.
  4. Confidentiality of responses is assured. (This is sometimes carried over into the next paragraph, and the assurances of confidentiality are 'prominently featured:' i.e., bolded, italicized, underlined.)
  5. A definite "deadline" for return of the survey is specified. Typically, you should figure out 10-14 business days from the date of the cover letter and once again, prominently indicate this return date in the cover letter. (Some exceptions to the time period may need to be made for holidays, peak work periods, etc. But do not allow too much time to go by in any event, for the danger lies in the subject's setting aside the letter and forgetting about the request.)
  6. Enclose and reference a postage-paid (stamped or metered), self-addressed envelope for the respondent to use for his/her convenience in returning the completed survey to you.
  7. You might also wish to provide your contact telephone number(s) in case the subject has a question about the survey.
  8. End by expressing your appreciation for the subject's completion and return of the survey instrument.
  9. If possible, the letter should fit on a single page and be reproduced on letterhead which represents the 'key supervising organization' under whose auspices the survey research is being conducted. For our doctoral and master's students: if you like, NAU's Faculty Service Center will make arrangements for you to purchase the necessary quantity of CEE letterhead for this purpose. It is also a plus if your dissertation chair/thesis supervisor can add his/her "co-signing" signature to your own signature as the principal investigator. If you are interested in either of these options, you should speak with your chair/supervisor to arrange them.

B. Example of a Survey Cover Letter

The following example is an actual survey cover letter composed by William Wiersma in his research commissioned by the Appalachia Educational Laboratory (AEL).Wiersma served as the external evaluator of the related study. As you review this letter, please compare it to the preceding list of qualities of 'good' cover letters (Part "A," pgs. 2-4).

(letterhead of Western Michigan University)

October 5, 1998

Dear [name]:

The Western Michigan University Evaluation Center has been engaged by the Appalachia Educational Laboratory (AEL) to be its external evaluator. As part of our evaluation, we are surveying people who are receiving AEL materials and services. There are two sections to the questionnaire; the first is a section that deals with R & D Notes, whose masthead is reproduced at the top of Section 1. You have been identified as a recipient of R & D Notes and familiar with it. The second section of the questionnaire deals with your perceptions of AEL materials and services in general.

The information provided through the questionnaires will be presented to the AEL Board, the federal government, and AEL staff to help them improve AEL materials and services. Your responses to this study will be confidential; no individual will be identified with his or her responses. The number on the questionnaire is a code so that we can identify those who have responded. This is to reduce the cost of follow-up and to eliminate the disruption of follow-up for those who have returned the questionnaire.

Your response is very important to the success of this evaluation. The information you provide is important to AEL, not only for program planning, but also in dealing with the funding agency. Completing the questionnaire should require no more than 20 minutes. We very much appreciate your completing and returning the questionnaire by October 26,1992, in the enclosed, postage-paid envelope.

Sincerely yours,

[signature]

William Wiersma, Ph.D.
External Evaluator for AEL

(typist's initials)

enclosure

More examples: Look at these examples and consider whether they are good examples of survey cover letters.

Indianapolis Parochial School Survey

Cumberland County School to Career Employment Survey

II. Issues Regarding Non-Response

Of course, we hope this doesn't happen to us! That all of our selected survey subjects will cheerfully comply and return a completed survey within our specified time period!

Ah, but now for the reality of the "respondent paper chase!"

Let's hope that 'tracking 'em down' isn't quite this arduous...!

A. Why Non-Response Is a Problem

The greater your non-response total or percentage, dear cyber-researchers, the bigger the danger of the following:

That your survey non-respondents are systematically different in some way from the respondents regarding the target outcome, key variables of interest in your study.

It all comes down to this key issue!!! In fact, this is so important that I recommend that all dissertation writers planning to use survey research as all or part of their study include the preceding point as one of their Chapter One Limitations (threats to validity)!

Please note the two critical points in this issue:

  1. Systematically different from respondents? If so, if the non-respondents 'aren't like' the respondents, then we cannot safely assume that they 'represent the SAME population!' This is a clear and present danger even if we 'played by the rules' and drew a probabilistic (i.e., simple random, systematic, stratified, or cluster) sample. If they end up being 'that different,' then for all intents and purposes they represent a 'different sub-group' than the respondents!

    AND....

  2. Does the 'difference' occur with regard to the 'target outcome variable(s) of interest' in the study? If those same non-respondents happen to support the Democratic gubernatorial candidate, while the respondents were by and large in support of the Republican candidate, that would be a problem for your study if your topic deals with political voting preferences. On the other hand, if your topic concerns perceptions regarding favorite books or magazines, the above difference might be of little or no concern (except, of course, if it can be shown that political party affiliation and magazine/book preference are themselves correlated!)! I think you see the key point here. Did the non-respondents deliberately choose to withhold the key information about a 'sensitive issue,' such as say, abortion or capital punishment, because in fact they differ radically in attitude from those who did choose to reveal their attitudes on the survey? Then we would have a problem, due to a systematic bias in the survey responses in our database. They simply would 'miss' or not capture a key 'chunk' of attitude/willingness to share response that actually exists out there in our total target sample (and not just those who cooperated with us and responded).

B. Minimum Return Rate and "Post Hoc" Remedial Steps

What, then, is a 'good bare-bones' minimum return rate to help minimize the danger inherent in the preceding two key sub-issues?

Again, I can at best give you a 'general all-purpose rule of thumb' that has been established and enforced by universities, professional journals and conferences, etc. But I will also caution you to do a bit of homework first, because this rate varies widely by specific academic discipline! Check prior studies in journals in your field to see if, and what, the 'topic-specific' minimum-acceptable survey return rate is!

The general one seems to be: 70%

Barring any discipline-specific different benchmarks; i.e., that you can 'convince us,' as your thesis or dissertation committee, that 'it's different in your field,' this is the minimum survey return rate we'll 'hold you to' in analyzing your thesis/dissertation data at CEE! (The same benchmark was in effect at the University of Massachusetts - Amherst, where I got my Ph.D.)

Again, remember! This rate, or a content-area specific different rate, is "bare minimum!" Even in the above, 30% is a hefty 'chunk' of your desired target sample basically 'unaccounted for!' That percentage certainly leaves the door open to the possibilities that "they could be different regarding the study variables!" So - while you can 'breathe a sigh of relief' that you got 'enough' surveys back so that you can proceed with analyzing your thesis/dissertation data, keep in mind that "more is ALWAYS preferred to less!" In reducing that potential 'window of systematic bias' or difference between your respondents and non-respondents!

So - don't rest on your laurels just yet! Your overriding goal should be to maximize your return rate - period! As close to 100% as you can get it! We'll look at some tips for maximizing this return rate in the following subsection.

For now, let's 'worst-case scenario it' and get that extreme out of the way! What if you've followed all the sage advice to come in the following subsection, did everything within your power to get that survey return rate up to the 70% overall or discipline-specific benchmark .. and it's just no go...???

It will then be up to you to 'convince' yourself and your thesis/dissertation committee that you have some evidence showing that the non-respondents, while a 'hefty percentage' in number, are in fact not systematically different from the respondents regarding those key target variables of interest. In other words, you'd be arguing that sure, your absolute number of respondents is 'low,' but those who didn't respond to your survey would have been quite similar on the key issues covered therein.

How do you do this? Not easy, I'll admit! But there are at least 2 possible avenues to consider to 'make your case' if you simply must go this route:

  1. Gathering evidence from existing archival databases. This one may be a 'long shot,' but a disseration candidate of mine used it to positive advantage! If someone else has a database, i.e., census data or prior survey data on a population from which your sample subjects were also drawn, and you can locate statistics to show a similarity on, say, background demographic or other variables, then you might be home free.

  2. Following up with a small sample of non-respondents. This one is generally more promising but will also probably require every ounce of your perseverance! It requires simply 'gritting your teeth and going after' those who failed to respond to your survey and either getting them to eventually complete it or perhaps (as in another dissertation committee on which I chaired) getting them to 'verbally walk through' the same items or issues as you asked about on the paper-and-pencil version of the instrument. In either case, you then take the two subgroups: 1) the original respondents and 2) the 'eventual reluctant (non) respondents,' and compare the two sets of answers. Again, your goal or hope is to show that there is no 'significant difference,' be it assessed quantitatively (i.e., an independent-samples t-test or Mann-Whitney U test) or qualitatively (by comparing the types and frequencies of open-ended written/spoken responses) on key variables between the two groups. If you can indeed demonstrate this, you are home free in that you have some evidence that the non-respondents, while admittedly a larger number/percentage than you'd have liked, 'are not systematically different from the respondents regarding the key variables of interest.'

C. Tips for Increasing Survey Response Rates

Again, may you not find yourself in the preceding precarious situation to begin with...! With good 'ex ante' planning and strategizing, there are some things you can do to help ensure a hefty response rate!

1.

  1. "Before the Fact" Issues

    Some of these have already been alluded to in the prior two survey lesson packets, as well as the tips on composing a 'good' cover letter on pgs. 2-4. In other words, careful thought and attention to quality and appearance of the 'whole package' will play a role in the target survey respondent/recipient's propensity to 'go along' with your request to complete and return it!

    Wiersma highlights three of these in particular:

    1. Any ensuing 'halo effect' to you of 'being positively regarded by the survey recipient.' This does not necessarily mean that he/she knows you personally. This "personal impression" issue can mean anything from how well you've stated the purpose of your survey research, to the identity of your 'sponsoring' organization and/or thesis/dissertation chair, to your own title/affiliation, to the care and attention you've paid to grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure in your writing - to, most likely, an overall 'holistic' judgment subsuming all of the preceding factors!

    2. Your indication to the respondent of his/her role and importance to the survey research. This too is a holistic type of "judgmental variable." Whether consciously or subconsciously, your survey subject will be making a decision as to his/her "buy-in" into the survey. Have you captured his/her attention and interest? Have you convinced him/her of the value of the responses to be offered in a sincere, 'non-patronizing' manner? and so on and so forth!

    3. Your expression of appreciation to the respondent. Ah yes, the 'good manners' issue again! Evaluated, at least on some level, by the survey recipient as to sincerity!

     

    Again, the preceding are to be considered along with the general 'quality control' issue of good survey construction and design that we've discussed at greater length in the two preceding packets!

    Also, you need to know that "jillions" of individual controlled studies have been done which have 'tinkered' with isolated factors or parts of the survey package itself: even such things as the color of the paper used for the cover letter, and the type and size of print. It may not surprise you to learn that, "bottom-line," none of these individual factors in and of itself had as much 'significance' as the overall attractiveness, ease of reading and appearance of the whole package. Trite as it may sound, then, you should aim these more general, "holistic" qualities, including running them by a pilot sample (more on that in a bit!), rather than worrying too much about the individual factors. Guess it confirms what we already knew: people make an overall value judgment, as opposed to getting too lost in the 'pieces!'

    One procedural factor has been found to make a significant difference, if it is feasible: contacting the respondent prior to mailing him/her the survey. It hasn't seemed to matter too much whether this 'pre' contact is done by letter, postcard, or telephone call. Perhaps it helps to increase the 'respondent's buy-in and perceived importance of his/her responses to the overall goals of the survey,' as per "ex ante factor b," in our preceding discussion.

    But what if you find that you still don't have the requisite minimum number/percentage of returns as of your specified target date? Don't despair! There are still some things you can do to follow up 'after the fact' to try and edge that return rate upwards!

  2. "After the Fact" Issues

  1. Re-send a reminder letter 7-10 business days after the deadline for return has passed. If you have used a numeric coding scheme to label and track each survey, such as was mentioned by Wiersma in his cover letter above, you will be able to readily identify the non-respondents while at the same time preserving the confidentiality of the respondents.

  2. Include an extra copy of the survey, along with a self-addressed, postage-paid envelope. This is done as a 'convenience,' in the event that the subject has perhaps misplaced the original and sincerely desires to respond.

You might also consider telephone calls to the non-respondents, although this can be rather time-consuming and expensive in the case of long-distance dialing. Also, repeated follow-ups (3rd, 4th and other 'waves') are occasionally necessary, although it has repeatedly been shown that they result in successively smaller percentages of returns - and granted, you may have little choice if you are still looking to 'hit' that minimum return rate!

Finally, keep in mind that while you are partially 'plugging' the original 'threat to validity' or 'limitation' of non-response bias (the key issues raised earlier in our discussion regarding non-respondents), with such lapses of time and successive waves of return you may be subtly introducing a slightly different 'threat to validity:' "Are 'late responders' systematically different from 'on-time responders' with regard to the key variables of interest?' The more time that passes between the original survey return date and the late returns, the greater the danger from this threat. As before, it will be incumbent upon you to marshal evidence of lack of difference between the two subgroups of respondents (on-time vs. late) in the same way as for the respondents vs. non-respondents (i.e., the 2 possible plans of action identified earlier).

Bottom line time: Nothing you didn't already know! It's far better to do everything within your power to ensure a hefty return rate "up front and on time," with your own careful planning and attention to such factors as quality and appearance of the survey and supporting materials, than it is to hope to 'save yourself' with non-respondent follow-up after the fact!

Tips on Minimizing Non-Response (Mailing)

And ... by way of transitioning to our final topic of discussion today regarding surveys, a key part of reaching this goal is, in effect, a 'dress rehearsal.' You might plan for a PILOT TEST with a 'holdout' sample of subjects ("similar to," i.e., perhaps a random draw, from the eventual study population, except that these subjects will not subsequently become part of the survey recipient sample -- "blast from the past," Intro and Res. Des. friends -- sound like "sampling without replacement?" from Population and Sampling?!) and/or prior review by a balanced selection of a panel of expert judges to provide input!

Such "dry runs" and/or "ex ante review by experts" can go a long way in helping you self-assess how well you attained those target holistic qualities of quality survey construction, ease of reading of materials, attractiveness of appearance of the whole package, etc.!


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Go back to Survey Research Part III: Many Happy Returns: The Cover Letter and Non-Response

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